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Posted: Friday February 25th, 2005 21:06 |
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beautiful black lady..
For you..
This is a poem to
bring you to
me, to draw you, pull
you, paint you,
to me
Your looks aren’t specific
The kaleidoscope reflects
Different, depending on, the angle I,
Behold, always unique, always terrific
Always..
When you smile
It radiates what money can never
Buy, when you laugh,
I laugh
It doesn’t take much, but I try
To keep the shine beating,
In the heart of your eyes
When you cry
I won’t.
I prefer to be your dam
To make sure that your
Tears flow, no. further than I am
To wash away, your concerns
Cleanse your fears, that’s the
kind of man, I am, and will be
You’re beautiful.
to the highest pinnacle, of every sense
to see, to listen to, to feel, to smell,
to taste you..
so vital.
Forever…
Up high, on a mountainous view, at nightime,
Sharing the stars ,
we look down
At the lights of life
Colours of blue and red flash.
In almost musical, fashion
In a place of our own
Sitting comfortable, outside chaos,
Eye contact, without words, we share passion
Which lead me to discover, that your lips are soft, moist to kiss
The burning acid test of,
Whether this is,
Love.
L.
O.
V.
E
Infatuated?
deeper into the brown swirls
Of your deep eyes I travel, we unravel
and loose all control, sipping savagely,
the sweet nectar, born around your neck
Tastes so sweet to me…
Gradually,
Find us moving into
Moving poetry.
Liberated from your clothes,
Let your skin breathe
And grip onto mine
don’t feel naked
As were about to intertwine
…..
With this poem
I’m going to bring you to me, and manifest real love
These words on the page, turn the key. And unlock the dove,
Although I see distrust, still stings, from your eyes.
Sit down.
Allow me to be slow... and credentialise
Look into my eyes…examine the truth!
I don’t have boundaries.
No words to lies.
Just let your body be,
Warm…be. Sanctified..
With this poem
I’m going to bring you to me
Too much time wasted
So much heart aching
I’ve come to end the pain
I want to heal, with you
No more breaking. grow stronger, like an,
everlasting flame, with blue and amber colored embers
side by side we can set the world so bright,
So bright, it remembers!
always,
Shining light into darkness
Walking with hands joined in faith
Through war zones, and shattered glass
Real love conquering every shade of hate we face.
For this poem is for you
Written and awake.
To cherish and adore,
To bring you
M.O.R.E..
And more…
Forever more…
AMOUR!
"Never chance...It's Always destiny
Written by
Jason Strachan
Last edited on Friday February 25th, 2005 21:06 by jason x
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Posted: Friday February 25th, 2005 21:21 |
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| That was very beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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Posted: Saturday February 26th, 2005 01:52 |
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...my pleasure, comes from your enjoyment princess. JX
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Posted: Saturday February 26th, 2005 08:32 |
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that poem was tight!!!! 
((prays there are brothers with the name Jason))
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Posted: Saturday February 26th, 2005 15:40 |
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Thank you, Jason that is absolutley beautiful.
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Posted: Sunday February 27th, 2005 22:06 |
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| that was a very beautiful poem. I was beginning to think that there werent men out there who felt that way about black women. thanks for proving my wrong.
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Posted: Wednesday March 2nd, 2005 00:21 |
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WoW!...dat really touched me...I felt that...im going thru a break-up at the moment and i just...felt dat.
Ur a Talent
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Posted: Wednesday March 2nd, 2005 21:54 |
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Thanks you ladies, shauny, Caraqueen, gottaluvher, and Nubian 1st, I love you all.
P.S Nubian 1st, I love that picture you've got up, I had to put that on my desktop, a warm illustration of 'black love' X
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Posted: Thursday March 3rd, 2005 23:13 |
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| You're famous btw!...I posted "The Kaleidoscope Reflects" ......one of the above lines in Google and it pointed me to this thread on Blacknet!
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Posted: Sunday May 8th, 2005 23:28 |
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That was beautiful!
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Posted: Monday May 9th, 2005 00:20 |
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Now thats more like it.
When the student is ready,the teacher will come.
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Posted: Monday May 9th, 2005 20:40 |
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@ jason, nice poem.....thanks
although I have to be honest, after reading your last poem which I believe was from your heart.....I dont believe your sincerity here....I think deep down you felt pressured to write about black women generally, by the reaction to the last poem...I don't believe you love all black women, or maybe your opinion changed from the last poem.
Just my opinion
Anyhoo...it was still a nice poem and refreshing to hear the words, I still enjoyed it............
thankyou..............................................
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Posted: Monday May 9th, 2005 21:36 |
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chi
I see your a smart cookie!!
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Posted: Monday May 9th, 2005 21:55 |
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Chi Please understand,
this is a poem. Thats it.
No argument or debate. Just a poem.
Think of this poem, the same as you would a painting hanging on a wall, or a sculputure.
hate it.
love it.
Be indiffrent about it.
Its all the same to me, i'm just happy, that you actually took the time to read it.
Don't worry so much about the author, if you would like to get to know me, here is my msn strachan2g@hotmail.com lets talk, I'm always open to meeting interesting people,
I wrote this poem, while praying, that God would bring a beautiful black women into my life, I was going through a lonely stage, and just hoped that If i wrote this with pure faith the door would open, but anyway, (DONT TRY IT, IT DOESNT WORK lol) Get your ass to the club like everyone else!!!)
Chi, whether this feels sincere to you, or it doesn't, is your own wonderful opinion. "all I can do is just prepear the meal the best I can, whether you enjoy the taste or not, is totally in you."
Ok, that may not be the best analogy, but hopefully you get what I mean
And for the record your right!!!
I don't love ALL black women.
I dont love ALL white women.
I dont love ALL asian women.
I dont love ALL latin/hispanic women.
I dont love ALL of anyone!!!
This is because badminded people are EVERYWHERE, no matter the gender, race, age, location, everywhere!! Its a f**king invasion!!
Anyone who tells you otherwise is an idiot.
You know what... Let me rectify this...
I LOVE ALL BEAUTIFUL WOMEN (with their beautiful hearts, Universally.)
I Love women who love to laugh,
I love women who love to cry,
I love women who like to be crazy,
I love women who hold you down,
I love women who like sex (Spank me baby!)
I love beautiful women universally!!
Universally,
I love,
women.
And thats the last im gonna say about me.
God, I love myself!!
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Posted: Tuesday May 10th, 2005 08:11 |
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Black_power wrote: chi
I see your a smart cookie!!
Yeah... yeah.... ya know it, aint scared to show it....................
I'm guessing some of the ladies haven't read the first poem yet...................(lol)
Anyway.....if they get something good from it, it's all good..............me, I'm not convinced at all.......................(lol)
@ Jason, I'm not arguing just had to give you my HONEST opinion......BTW I can't really get to know you, you see I'm golden caramel............."it's not the same" remember?
LOL LOL LOL .......................
It's always better so say what you feel instead of trying to please others, that's why I respected the first poem more, even if it may have been divisive..............
You definately have a talent though....keep it up.
This is where I bow out and just let the ladies enjoy your words ok..............
Last edited on Tuesday May 10th, 2005 08:19 by chi
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Posted: Monday June 13th, 2005 18:39 |
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| Jason I thank you for your poem it was magnificent and tremendous. The words spoke such truth that I am encouraging my self to be more open and forgiving with my partner for my aching and pain caused by previous relationships is slowly tarnishing the one at present. My mind has been opened up and some thoughts are now free I feel inspired into continuing to write my own poetry...thank you. Your poem is a prayer, It's a blessing, it's beauty at it's best in the form of words so passionate and delicate. I thank you again and applaud I am left in awe. I wish you all the best in life take care and stay blessed...
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Posted: Friday June 24th, 2005 21:44 |
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WOW!
Cookie, thanks for your kind words, I really dont know what to say! (kinda bad for a poet right?) but,
THANK YOU!
Feel free to print this off and take a copy for yourself with my blessing if you like, I'm just really happy, that you're happy! lol
Thank you for reading.
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