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Posted: Thursday February 17th, 2005 20:05 |
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i love poetry and have just done this to get my floetry going again if you dont get its ok thats cool if you do thats great. i used to just write about pain and broken hearts but i am trying to venture into other areas. this is rough no twaeking this is just one those thought poems. i the mood i am in right now stay blessed
I am that which i be
Not what you see
I am in the wilderness
I am to who at a crossroads
My mind is up in the clouds
My soul is down by the sea
My heart is wrapped up
Sometimes i feel caught up
I wonder who she be
Then i realise I am me
Fruitfull blessed soul
Wandering to and fro
Listening immersing embracing
I am queen i am loving
me
I am who i be
Not what you see
Last edited on Thursday February 17th, 2005 20:07 by LadyDay
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Posted: Friday February 25th, 2005 21:45 |
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Nice little freestyle thier lady day,
its good you realise you're wonderful! As we all are.. 
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Posted: Saturday March 12th, 2005 13:13 |
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jason x wrote: Nice little freestyle thier lady day,
its good you realise you're wonderful! As we all are..
thanks jason x. one of my friends is performance poet and she tried at one time to get me to go in that direction but i werent feeling it at the time
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Posted: Tuesday March 15th, 2005 17:22 |
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Top one Lady Day.
That is ssooooo' nice and so true...
I feel this.
Last edited on Tuesday March 15th, 2005 17:25 by samandsuvi
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Posted: Saturday March 19th, 2005 03:14 |
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Yeah, I was kinda feeling the random deepness of the lines, (yes, I'm a new member)
It seemed as if you were looking for a mirror that reflects not the physical reflection but the true reflection of the inner self, and it seems you found it. Of course this is just my mind's conjecture or interpretation of your verse!
Keep it coming!
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Posted: Monday March 28th, 2005 17:20 |
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Crae wrote: Yeah, I was kinda feeling the random deepness of the lines, (yes, I'm a new member)
It seemed as if you were looking for a mirror that reflects not the physical reflection but the true reflection of the inner self, and it seems you found it. Of course this is just my mind's conjecture or interpretation of your verse!
Keep it coming!
thank you..your words inspire me to keep on writing
thanks
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Posted: Tuesday April 26th, 2005 06:13 |
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I love your expression through words.. Your vision of self shines out a ligh tin written form...
I totaly got your poem and I totaly Loved it...
Your a gifted soul.... Write on!!!
P.S. Love the photo enclosed. Thats beautiful....
God Bless
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Posted: Tuesday April 26th, 2005 06:14 |
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Sorry .. I ment to write...
Your Light within....
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