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Evil_eyez
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Posted: Tuesday February 8th, 2005 01:56 |
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These walls that surround me
Keeps me from being me
Keeps me from being
The person that lives deep inside of me
These walls that surround me
Keeps me from breathing fresh air
Keeps me from knowing
That someone else cares
These walls that surround me
Are walls that I've created
Walls that keep me from feeling pain
But with these walls that surround me I feel protected
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Posted: Wednesday February 9th, 2005 15:25 |
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| Thank you! I could relate to this. I have been trying for years to tear down these walls I've built around myself.
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Posted: Thursday February 17th, 2005 18:03 |
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| I can also relate. But it seems when i feel 'safe' enough to let the walls down something happens to remind me why i had them up in the first place.
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Posted: Monday February 21st, 2005 19:55 |
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Deep words...
walls..either seclusion or protection.. ive put up walls around me since i can remember..learnin how to tear them down myself..guess i dnt kno any better...yet anyway..
nice...evil eyez.
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Posted: Friday February 25th, 2005 21:19 |
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Yes, I think this poem has a very deep message to it, as I think everyone puts up their own "walls" to a certain extent. Maybe its a nessacary coping device to be able to live in the society that we do? Being bomarded by all kinds of advertising, emotional stresses for example..
Thoughts anyone?
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Posted: Friday February 25th, 2005 21:24 |
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Evil_eyez wrote:
These walls that surround me
Keeps me from being me
Keeps me from being
The person that lives deep inside of me
These walls that surround me
Keeps me from knowing
That someone else cares
These were the lines that meant the most to me as i could relate to them 500%
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Posted: Saturday February 26th, 2005 00:46 |
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Thnanx ya'll......i've been trying to knock these walls down for a while
but i am always reminded of why i put up those walls in the first place which makes it ten times as hard to break down these walls.....n being truthful i dont think i want to
but thanx for the replies ya'll....i'm glad that you all felt this poem so deeply
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Posted: Tuesday April 26th, 2005 06:08 |
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I must say I felt this write. Ive been there at a point of my life. I agree 100% .... Souls go through tough times before coming one within. Its a journey yet the strong get through it...
God Bless...
Much poetic respect.....
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Posted: Saturday April 30th, 2005 04:15 |
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| I really relate to this poem, if only I knew of a way to break down these walls
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