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Posted: Tuesday August 31st, 2004 16:58 |
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Are you guys really that jealous. I knew my work was good!!!lol
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Posted: Wednesday September 1st, 2004 15:12 |
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| OH MY GAWWWD!!! YOU PEOPLE ARE SOMETHING ELSE. LMAO. I JUST LOVED THE WAY YOU GUYS TRIED TO MAKE IT LOOK AS IF I'M ON SOME EGO sh*t. HOW COME OUT OF ALL THE POSTS I TRIED TO MAKE, THIS WAS THE ONE YOU KEPT? HOW IMMATURE. BUT IF ANYONE IS INTERESTED IN READING THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL THEY CAN LOG ON TO BLACK-POETRY.COM. AT LEAST THE PEOPLE WHO RUN THAT SITE ARE'NT TRIFLING. ANYWAY I STILL WISH EVERYONE THE BEST IN THEIR ENDEAVORS.
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Posted: Wednesday September 1st, 2004 15:25 |
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Cypress....let's get something straight...you attempted to post the same topic more than once and we don't allow that. If you needed assistance in posting your poem all you had to do was ask. Simple. What motive could we possibly have in trying to make you look a certain way? ...that doesn't make sense. This thread is still here so that you could attempt to post your poem here in the appropriate section Poetry and the Spoken Word...I hope things are clearer for you now and we trifiling, immature people wish you the best too.
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Posted: Friday September 3rd, 2004 17:23 |
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Well I tried to post my poem plenty of times and it kept getting cut off. I had written words of encouragement for the other posters and I find it weird that the only post that you seemed to keep was the one where I lost my cool. But anyway I'll post my poem.
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she seduces souls as words flowLast edited on Friday September 3rd, 2004 17:26 by Cypress
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Posted: Friday September 3rd, 2004 17:42 |
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The Greatest of Them All
she seduces souls as words flow
through fecundated wombs
breeding light while thoughts burn deep
leaving scars as you lay branded for life
mesmerized by violet nights swathed in rhapsodical rhymes
her dome is a mountain buttressed by the windows to
her soul which holds the kiss of life
while lips as wide as Nigerian rivers flow
deep within the sweetest taboos
dark and seductive
the way a woman should
not like these r&b divas
who make you feel good for the moment
no this cool breeze transcends time
Afrika flowing through her veins
soul so deep it's easy to get lost
i guess that's why she's the king of sorrow
giving voice to s-m-o-o-o-t-h operators and Somalian women
scraping for pearls
but what about the plight of the mulatto child
born to this world Helen Folasade Adu
possessing heaven unknown to those not in tune
cuz only a select few can truly understand
as she silhouettes softly into the night
while the Yoruban drum chants
love is stronger than p-r-i-i-i-d-e
love is stronger than p-r-i-i-d-e
love is stronger than pride
over and over
while minds lay hypnotized
as lovers rock
a diva like no other she will always be
the greatest of them all
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Posted: Friday September 3rd, 2004 17:59 |
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I'm glad you were finally able to post your work.
I just read it, well done.
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Posted: Tuesday September 7th, 2004 14:48 |
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Ashanti wrote: I'm glad you were finally able to post your work.
I just read it, well done.
Thank You!
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Posted: Tuesday September 7th, 2004 21:45 |
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Really enjoyed that, nice one
I'm also a fan of her music, I find it easy to lose myself in it 
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Posted: Wednesday September 8th, 2004 10:55 |
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That was lovely ....Well Done
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