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Posted: Tuesday July 20th, 2004 20:57 |
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I HATE THE WAY YOU LIE TO ME
I HATE THE GAMES YOU PLAY
I HATE HOW YOU ACT LIKE YOU DON'T CARE
AS IF EVERYTHING IS OK
I HATE THE WAY YOU WALK IN AND OUT OF MY LIFE
I HATE THE WAY I WAS IGNORANT
AND IMAGINED BECOMING YOU'RE WIFE
I HATE THE WAY YOU SUCKED ME IN
JUST TO LEAVE ME HERE ALONE
I HATE THE WAY YOU CAN LIVE WITHOUT ME
CAN'T EVEN PICK UP THE PHONE
I HATE THE WAY YOU MAKE FEEL
AS IF I'M NOT WOTH A DIME
I HATE THE WAY YOU PUSH ME ASIDE
LIKE YOU'RE TOO BUSY TOO FIND THE TIME
BUT MOSTLY WHAT I HATE
IS THE EMOTIONAL INVESTMENT THAT I MADE
HAS TURNED OUT TO BE NOTHING
BUT A MEMORY THAT TIME WILL FADE
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Posted: Thursday July 22nd, 2004 00:17 |
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Posted: Friday August 20th, 2004 21:22 |
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i think this is a realic piece because i think most women can in some way, shape or form relate to what you are saying. i like the way you acknowlege your down falls and dont play the victim or the marta but you tell it how it is and how you feel.You dont deny your feelings; that your going to need time but you will heel!
Hectic. i hope to see more of your work
Last edited on Friday August 20th, 2004 21:24 by Hecktick Gal
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Posted: Friday August 20th, 2004 22:19 |
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hey, i like ur poem. It makes sense and i know that alot of girls/women can relate 2 it at some stage in there lives. Boys can treat a girl like sh*t, but so can men. So u should really learn to love urself b4 u get involved with any boy man again(in relation to former thread.
It really says alot about you and i just wana let u know that i read ur last thread and i dont think ur a sket, maybe i would have done back in the day, but every1 makes mistakes, as u get older u learn why peeps act da way they do and learn from ur own misfortunes.
I hope that u leave dem boys alone 4 da moment and u should see a councellor or something and get to da bottom of why u have little respect for urself an let mans treat u like an object.
look at all ur good points, 4get everyone else, i dont know how old u are now but u sound depressed to me from ur former thread. U wrote a good poem, writing is a form of release for most people, carry on with ur good talent, and make the most out of it, 4get the manz 4 now!
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