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yaya
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Posted: Saturday April 21st, 2007 15:41 |
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R.I.P
he sat me down after the grinding, slow bumping, all night kissing and huging
told me how things had taken a turn
that he meet a new girl
and her name was lacey
said how it was now her turn
made me bite my tongue
nearly choked on the damn thing
all the time invested on this brother
my money
my life
my love
my bed
he must have fell and bumped his head
to think i was just going to leave like a fool
he teased me
thought he loved me
yet he betrayed me
and now he wants lacey
or stacey
he must be crazy
talking about how its her turn
switched on me
once i let him in
had me thinking
i was his one and only"
kissed my teeth and i turned
faced him
grabbed for the empty bottle on the floor
the wine he used in seducing me
and smashed it over his head
RIP
lover
written by Yaya
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Posted: Monday April 23rd, 2007 14:32 |
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personally, I find this poem very distasteful.
Hated it.
makes me wonder what kind of person you are
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yaya
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Posted: Monday April 23rd, 2007 16:38 |
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Everyone is intitled to their own opinion.
But thanks for letting me know your's, actually this was a reconstruted version of a poem that i heard at an open mic night.
Just wanted to share it with BNvillagers.
X
PS. it does not reflect who I am at all, its just a situation that someone went through and parts of the poem has been over hyped to make people wonder.
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Posted: Monday April 23rd, 2007 19:11 |
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wonder about what?
how to plagiarize someone else's work?
anyway, thanks for sharing
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yaya
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Posted: Thursday May 17th, 2007 14:44 |
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i am not plagiarizing anyones work, quite a few people read poems or things that they find amusing or that they can relate to and become inspired to create their own versions or simular written pieces, this does not mean they are plagiarizing *what is this are we in school??* besides its just something that is being shared on BNvillage i am not publishing it ....so please relax!
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Posted: Friday May 18th, 2007 23:37 |
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I'm relaxed.....but it is still plagiarizing
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