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Posted: Thursday September 8th, 2005 04:23 |
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I sit wandering,
when did the molehill become a mountain
when did we start to grow apart
It seems we have mastered the art of war
but like in war we can never win.
Too many casualties.
My heart bleeds, I want to reach out
but you are unreachable
you touch me physically,
yet I can't touch you
because the mountain stands between us.
So many words left unsaid,
conversation is pointless you say
you've said it all, yet you haven't said enough
we are now intimate strangers
holding on to what was, a hope
we dream will happen
I now know that silence can be more painful
much more painful than words.
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Posted: Tuesday September 27th, 2005 21:29 |
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I like, I like it's a good start.
Your fourth line made me stop and think, because i've never associated war with art... and so I find that an interesting association.
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Posted: Tuesday September 27th, 2005 21:42 |
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 that poem is like the story of my life!
very good.
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Posted: Wednesday October 5th, 2005 14:10 |
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| Very nice - I like that
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Posted: Wednesday October 12th, 2005 00:24 |
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dark princess wrote: I like, I like it's a good start.
Your fourth line made me stop and think, because i've never associated war with art... and so I find that an interesting association.
Dark princess, you need to get out more!
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then you haven't even begun to think about what it means to be human" ~ Dr C.T.Vivian
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