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Posted: Monday July 25th, 2005 11:22 |
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Ok peeps, this forum was created for people who would like to engage in the art of writing.
What I would like to do, is run a story whereby people could add, at a paragraph at a time, their own storyline.
This has been done before, but because now there is a dedicated spot, hopefully it will not divert from its course and the people taking part, will see it not only as a means to improve their writing, but would want it kept up!
I'll come back with the first paragraph.
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 11:22 |
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The wind howled through the open windows bringing along with it the cold icy January rain. Thunder and lightning blazed into the room and owned it.
The giant oak bed creaked with a sigh as it had stood staidly in its position for over a hundred years - nothing was going to make it move more than a centimetre.
Obi came into the room and stared ....
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 11:38 |
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| At Ada's lifeless eyes, they had been so full of joy once. He swallowed and took a good look. It had seemed she was staring at him accusingly, a silent curse for doing nothing while she lay there being murdered. The bonds that tied him to the bed were as tight as those around his heart. She wasn't accusing him, she was emploring him. AVENGE ME her eyes said.
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 12:05 |
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Obi ran out of the room in a rage. He could not grasp his breath as his thoughts raced. He proceeded out the back door completely forgetting about the terrible weather which would prove destructive to his human body after enduring it for 30 extended minutes. The bone-chilling, face-numbing air did not bother him as his mind took over as the sole reality of his existence and all he could think about was her.
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 13:05 |
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| She was the essence of his being, the fire in his heart, everything inside him was urging him to turn around and go back to her. He stood still for a minute braving the elements, trying to think straight, what would be the consequences of the action he so wanted to take, "wake up" he said to himself. His legs are numb as he stands trying to figure out where he will go and what he must do......
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 13:15 |
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His sides ached from where he had been kicked as he sat strapped to the bed. His whole body was a confusion of pain and throbbing. Rumaging hurriedly through his clothes he collected some things together and made his way out of the house. The police would be there soon, Ada's husband would no doubt have them blame him for her murder. Who would believe that Obi, the gardener from skid row was innocent in this situation. All his life he had had it hard. Ada's husband was a powerful man with connections. Starting his car, Obi pulled out of the driveway and sped out into the open road, he knew where he was going...
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 13:32 |
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Driving down the rocky, narrow road Obi reflected on the many nights of forbidden passion that he shared with his Ada. But she wasn't his Ada and never would be his Ada. He felt a warm tear trickle down his face and quickly wiped it away. This was no time to think about the past...he had to anticipate the future without the love of his life. Ada was gone and he would be blamed for her murder. There was no turning back.
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 13:41 |
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| I have to go somewhere, anywhere but here he thought, checking the rear view mirror meticulously every few seconds. He started to lull his mind of paranoia; it was early in the morning too early even for early birds he reasoned. But he couldn’t help feeling that somehow someone woke up in the wee hours of the morning ready to start their day and peered through the window expecting nothing out of the ordinary, and to her surprise, an unknown large Blackman, wearing a black trench coat, a brimful hat covering his face stealthily moving out of their neighbor’s house. He wouldn’t be surprised if she or they got out their binoculars to get a better look at his visage, it was a white neighborhood and white people were vigilant when it came to protecting their territory
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 18:45 |
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| But then he said, "Cha man me no time fe tink what dem a want". So he got back into his car and started to drive again. It was still raining, but the darkness had all but gone. The windscreen wiper was going at full speed. As he continued driving he noticed a figure, from his window - one minute it was there and the next, it disappeared. The rain was making it immpossible for him to be sure. He slowed the car down and and then he saw it - a bright red raincoat on the verge of the road ...
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 21:41 |
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| Ada's killer! Obi slammed his foot on the brakes his brakes screaming in a high pitched wail as his car hydroplanned and slid along the wet road. He jumped out and left the car moving, the man recognised him and raised his gun. He slammed into his midrift as a single shot rang out. They fell to the floor splashing in the mud on the roadside. Obi's vision blurred and his head spun, he realised he had been punched on the nose. Blood trickling onto his lip he lifted his head to see the red coat running into the woods.
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Posted: Tuesday July 26th, 2005 22:50 |
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| Miles away in a dimly lit library an anxious Father Louis Malle sat amongst a gallery of dusty books. Father Malle was a small man with somewhat nondescript features and beady eyes, black and expressionless. It was almost dawn when the tranquilty of the library was shattered by a knock on the heavy oak doors. 'May I come in sir?' without allowing Father Louis to answer, Hose Barcelo entered the room holding a cellular phone. 'It is Monsieur Jacques and he wishes to speak to you'. Father Malle took the phone, 'Father I have news' barked the cold voice of Jacques de Palme. The news that Father Louis Malle heard made him...
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Posted: Wednesday July 27th, 2005 11:48 |
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drop to his knees. His daughter had been killed the night before and he had not been there to protect her. Many sleepless nights were spent worrying about her safety. He never liked her controlling husband anyway. Immediately Father Louis's face wrinkled as the tears flowed freely down his cheeks: "Where is he!" cried Louis. "Where is who?" said Jacques, startled by the abrupt questioning. "Where is that monster...her husband!!!" Jacques was silent for a few seconds before responding, "Friend I am sorry for your loss and I am here for you if you need to talk. Just don't do anything stupid." Jacques ignored his friends irrationality as he knew how quick-tempered Louis was and how much he hated his daughter's husband.
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Posted: Wednesday July 27th, 2005 17:39 |
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| The ancient painting of mother Mary stared down on the holy father and he silently shook in torment. When he rose, red eyes full of tears and clenched fists, he tore off his holy robes and removed his treasured bible from his jacket pocket. He went to find his black gloves and dark hat. Picking up his old hunting rifle from the cabinet her marched out of the rectory.
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Posted: Wednesday July 27th, 2005 18:19 |
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Out in the fresh air, the Father stopped to heave in a deep breath, then he vowed, "Vengence is MINE!!!!" No one is safe now. I'll hunt down every door and in every valley - he'll not get away from me. Her husband did this and I will see his blood spatter across all of England!!! ......Bwhahahahah!!!!!"
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Posted: Wednesday July 27th, 2005 18:30 |
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| Sensing Father Malle's mood, Barcelo prepared the Father's car. The engine of the old Lancia coughed to life piercing the calmness of the night. 'Father please take care'; 'I will' replied Father Louis Malle before roaring off into the night. Barcelo smiled as he dialed Jacques de Palme's number. 'Jacques, it is your dear friend Hose de Jesus - Malle has left, I trust you will reunite him with Ada tonight'. That I will, came the reply. Last edited on Wednesday July 27th, 2005 18:33 by Numair
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Posted: Wednesday July 27th, 2005 19:34 |
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| Obi opened his eyes with effort, he was lying down in a hospital cot, his head, nose and arms covered in bandages, and his neck was writhing in pain. He had the wierd feeling someone karate chopped in the back of the neck, his brain pulsating with a never ending migrane. He tried to remember how he ended up in this mess, his mind still recovering races to a coffeshop. He was sitting there reading the newspaper, he got throught the headline which has been the same all week: some embezzlement and scandal at the catholic church, he was a few pages into the newspaper reading an article on the upcoming retirement of an old priest, when he glanced up, how would he suppose to know that a simple look would lead to the most frighting experience of his life. Last edited on Wednesday July 27th, 2005 19:40 by Taysense
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Posted: Friday July 29th, 2005 11:36 |
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| The car drove off at a high speed. Father Malle said to the driver, through the glass that seperated them "My heart is so heavy tonight" The driver drove on for a while before replying. "Don't worry Father. The day is still young - a lot can happen in a day ...."
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Posted: Friday July 29th, 2005 14:38 |
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While riding silently in the back of the car, Louis thought about his mistake. Ada was indeed a mistake. She was conceived during a fling with a young girlfriend. Ada was conceived out of Louis’s confusion during his youth, but Louis had never allowed himself to resent her. He loved his daughter and vowed to protect her at any cost. He had failed. His beloved mistake became the driving force in his life and now she was no more. Louis hung his head as the tears continued to stream down his face. 'Why me God? Why me!' he shouted, startling the sober driver.
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Posted: Friday July 29th, 2005 15:31 |
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| The driver did not reply but continued to drive. He too was contemplating. First Father Malley's daughter, now ... . He stopped his thoughts short. Its too late to back out now. He has already been partially paid. He started to think how he got mixed up in the whole affair. It only started out as a bit of fun, now his body craved for the thing that others controlled. The white stuff was just too nice to give up. Just do this one job, and you'll get it they said. But the one job turned out to be a lot. He should had known. Now he's come too far - he's hooked and now he's at their mercy. The rain lashed at every window. Faster, faster he rode - he knew his reward - his mind told his belly to want it, be near it, to have to have it NOW!. The familiar stone red driveway was now in his vision. This was the only time he slowed down. He must not ruin it now ...
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Posted: Monday August 1st, 2005 12:16 |
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Off topic
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Posted: Monday August 1st, 2005 14:19 |
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As Obi lay aching in his hospital bed he remembered that fateful day in that coffee shop. He recalled briefly glancing up from his newspaper and noticing a beautiful woman walk by. Her hair was a shiny jet black and her eyes sparkled as they pulled him in into their dark realm. Her lips were blood red and quivered as she managed to allow a half smile. Obi was so captivated by her angelic presence that he immediately waved nervously. She paused, confused by his excitement and slowly walked towards him. She sat right in front of him and looked down at her fumbling hands, ‘So…what are you reading?’ she asked quietly. Obi’s chest throbbed.
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Posted: Tuesday August 2nd, 2005 19:17 |
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"Nurse, nurse!" cried Obi. As a nurse came to Obi's side, he said, "I need some help here. Could you get me a telephone?" Obi clutched his belly in pain.
"Sir, you are in no condition to speak to speak to anyone!"
"Get me a phone, damn it! I decide if I can talk!"
"Er .. right away Sir"
The nurse hurried out of the room. She came back with ...
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Posted: Wednesday August 3rd, 2005 11:07 |
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the nurse came back with.................................Ada's husband..............
hello Obi......we meet again...........
the pain gripped in Obi's chest, he feels like he can't breath................
what the f*ck..............
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| “Leave us�, said Sam, Ada’s husband of eleven long and unhappy years. Obi wanted to scream for help but his pride would not allow him to. He hated Sam for blackmailing him for so many years and refused to run from him anymore. It was time to face the man who had made his life a living hell. Sam was a lanky man with broad shoulders. He wore big clothes and many layers to hide his slim figure, but Obi was not fooled. Sam was a coward who thrived off of others’ misery. He hid behind his powerful position like he hid under his many layers of clothing. Underneath the hype, however, Sam was empty and pitiful. Instead of divorcing Ada when he first learned of the affair between them, Sam instead blackmailed Obi for years.
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Posted: Thursday August 4th, 2005 18:11 |
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"why did you kill her Obi?" The calm tone of Sam's voice unnerved him. Eyeing him warily from his bed he watched Sam sit down strectched out in what appeared to be a relaxed posture. Still not looking at him directly Sam repeated the question. He was glancing casually around the ward. A shadowy man hung about by the door, he looked like a policeman. A nurse was folding away some tiles, Obi paused until she left
"It wasn't me"
"Do you deny sleeping with my wife" came the reply through gritted teeth. Attempting to affect an air of menace, Sam was no longer keeping up the pretence of amicability.
"No... I... err"
"I have had you followed for months, don't waste time lying. I have photographic proof. That man by the door over there? That is inspector O'Maley and he is very interested about the fingerprints left in my marital bedroom. I should say that these pictures should prove most interesting to him" He pulled two large prints from a brown envelope, images of Obi and Ada, unmistakably a couple.
"So it's blackmail again is it Sam? At a time like this, THIS is the first thing you think to do? What do you want from me now hey?" Obi's voice had begun as a hissed whisper and rose steadily so that by the time he finished speaking it was a shout " Are you not even jealous Sam? Not even Jealous that I could give her what you were obviously not up too!"
Sam regarded him casual, taking time over smoothing his shirt and straightening his tie. When he spoke his voice was clear. "Ahh but you see dear boy, things are working out quite well in my favour. I can overlook the slight to my pride" he here snickered "you see, her death is most convienient. Of course the fact that she was bedding you would have helped me divorce her with ease leave her with nothing, but this amounts to the same effect without the drama. No my friend, no more of that, you see I mention Ada's death not to scold you, far from it. I only intend to show you that once again you are completly at my disposal, if you need further convincing...." He nodded his head towards O'Maley, Obi shook his head "good boy... now here is what I want from you..."
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Posted: Thursday August 4th, 2005 19:51 |
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Sam stopped suddenly before finishing his sentence, he was looking down at the floor where obi's clothes were strewn around. "My hat" he exclaimed pointing at green fisherman hat on the floor beside the rest of obi's belongings. Obi looked at him confusedly, and turned his still stiff neck around and saw the hat, he remembered quickly picking it up at from a rack at Sam's house as he fled the scene.
"You know that was my dad's favorite hat" Sam said his face changed, more gentle and his mood changed from an angry grin to a more reminiscent one. O'mally and Obi exchanged confused glances and then returned their stare back to Sam who was fully enthralled in his own mind. " Yea, me and my old man went fishing everyday in the lake, we'd bring our lawn chairs and sit enjoying the summer breeze and we just watch and fish. We'd sit there silent till sunset and watch the waves of lake." he continued still lost in his reverie. Man I could sit there all day with pops, I didn't care about playing hide and seek or marbles like the other kids. "
What are you talking about"? obi interrupted. Sam finally pulled himself back to reality, the kid in him disappeared and the abusive, violent man returned. He walked up to obi's left window and peered out to the parking lot. " hmm, looks like you got visitors..cops,some uniform and a female detective, we're gonna continue this later obi, pick up the phone when it rings." said Sam picking up the hat from the floor.
Sam gestured at O'mally to leave, and then he proceeded to walk out. "What's your game Sam?" asked Obi as Sam was about to exit. " I don't play games" said Sam giving obi a mean stare and then he walked off, the hat clutched tightly in his hand.
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