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Posted: Monday December 11th, 2006 16:41 |
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Just finished putting together a new website and would appreciate some critical and honest feedback.
Its my first time out using Flash MX and Front Page, so from a self taught beginner's point of view I just need another set of eyes to look at things; navigation, the way it feels, looks as I am bound to miss the obvious, especially typo's..
Cheers..
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Posted: Monday December 11th, 2006 16:52 |
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| Your qualifications are impressive..although a little scary! Grammar is a bit ropey..doesn't leave a good impression and that whiplash sound is, well, alarming. lol
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Posted: Monday December 11th, 2006 17:57 |
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Thanks, please point out the grammar issues as these can be sorted..
The sound is suppose to be a deep breath in and then breathing out again.. but thanks..
Last edited on Monday December 11th, 2006 17:57 by EF MAX
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Posted: Tuesday December 12th, 2006 23:12 |
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The sound is suppose to be a deep breath in and then breathing out again..
It's too loud and too fast. It's more like a small jet engine than breathing.
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