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Posted: Thursday February 23rd, 2006 20:02 |
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Hey ppl
I have just re-launched the brand new version of my website http://www.dtads.com or http://www.dtads.co.uk .
If you got any spare time, have a look at the website then share your thoughts, ideas and feedback on it, i.e your first impression?, is it easy to use? any spelling mistakes? etc..... please don't hesitate to criticise it, I am open to constructive criticsm as that's the only it can/will be improved.
I am currently editting some bits on it, to make sure things are working well.
Oh by the way you can also spread the word around.
Cheers in advance
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Posted: Friday February 24th, 2006 05:57 |
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Blackthought wrote: Hey ppl
I have just re-launched the brand new version of my website http://www.dtads.com or http://www.dtads.co.uk .
If you got any spare time, have a look at the website then share your thoughts, ideas and feedback on it, i.e your first impression?, is it easy to use? any spelling mistakes? etc..... please don't hesitate to criticise it, I am open to constructive criticsm as that's the only it can/will be improved.
I am currently editting some bits on it, to make sure things are working well.
Oh by the way you can also spread the word around.
Cheers in advance
Wow what an improvement on the first version. Much better.
Now very easy to navigate and kept simple with not too much choice amongst the home page sub sections.
First impressions are those of proffessionalism which is key for the service your selling. Users will say to themselves ' I want a site like this one' which is what your trying to create.
Believe me ive seen sites offerring design services and their own front garden isnt too clever....... always amazes me.
Last edited on Friday February 24th, 2006 06:02 by Le Moor
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Posted: Friday February 24th, 2006 08:52 |
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Excellent design I love it!
You just need to check the english as there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors that glare out at the reader eg. "Working with overseas client is now more easier.." should be at least "Working with our overseas clients is easier.." but it would be better to take time to re-write all the copy or get someone else to do it.
Less is often more.. the gallery looks padded out with the images and logos, a lot of it looks like development work (you might as well put some clip art there) and it isn't really necessary and it only takes away from the level of professionalism you have created in the other sections, the same goes for the old website designs and templates. Lastly, the comment about the naked ladies site comes across as tacky and immature.
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Posted: Friday February 24th, 2006 10:39 |
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Thanks Lemoor I really appreciate you taking your time to look at it bro, I took note of some of the things members mentioned last time I had it up, then modified it accordingly.. especially some points that you raised..
Michelle33 wrote: Excellent design I love it!
You just need to check the english as there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors that glare out at the reader eg. "Working with overseas client is now more easier.." should be at least "Working with our overseas clients is easier.." but it would be better to take time to re-write all the copy or get someone else to do it.
Cheers I had someone who looked over, but I haven't particularly focused on the news section, but will have a look at it today re-read it, maybe you might also be able to help if you have time...
Less is often more.. the gallery looks padded out with the images and logos, a lot of it looks like development work (you might as well put some clip art there) and it isn't really necessary and it only takes away from the level of professionalism you have created in the other sections, the same goes for the old website designs and templates. Lastly, the comment about the naked ladies site comes across as tacky and immature.
As for the gallery/portfolio I had two minds on that one, first I was going to create a separate section, called "delevopement or experiment", I have a lot more stuff, to put there but like you mentioned less option is better, becuase it distract the user away from the main objective of the site... but for some reason people tend to like seeing other stuff that you do that are not as formal... if you know what I mean...
Will take that on board...
Oh and as for the naked lady, its a side project thing that I have in mind, in a nutshell I want to created a model web site, where potential profile can have their profile there... there is not intention to have nudity at ALL on there just... but I can see where you are coming from.. and maybe until its developed properly I will leave it out of my portfolio.
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Posted: Friday February 24th, 2006 15:47 |
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It has alot of elements. With the loading marker or status bar appearing all over from 0 to 100% it looks to be a prototype still experiment website. Personally I would take out or place on the corner somewhere in the content and rest of the pages page. Its ok in the entry page but it gets abit repeative after that. Maybe replace with a character or something like I see some people use diffent charcters for their mouse pointer. Again this is just an observation.
Overall it looks like it took much work to produce. And want to say thanks for sharing.
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